Previewers Comments (Week Eight)


~Classmates Thoughts~


This week since we have completed editing (or so we thought), I believed it might be a good idea to have our classmates watch the finished product and tell us their opinions and what they thought we should change or adjust. It was also a good way to hear how we progressed from our midterm.

Luckily we have a great class and they were all very willing to help out and share their thoughts :> 









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